The Things You Own, End Up Owning You - 2 New Tracks

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DJ MASSI, Oct 15, 2015.

  1. DJ MASSI

    DJ MASSI New Member

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    Not been doing this long so still experimenting a bit.. thought I would upload these tracks I recently worked on.

    Both tracks are quite different



     
  2. vikataur

    vikataur New Member

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    @paper street, vibe's good, phrasing is good just needs a little more energy in the final segment
     
  3. P.Y.S

    P.Y.S New Member

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    Both sound deep, like em both i got nothin constructive to say soz :)
     
  4. Dark Lizardro

    Dark Lizardro The Lizard that has a hammer Staff Member

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    I'll be honest here:

    Paper Street:
    The basses are too static for my taste. I mean, you could detune some oscs in the synth you're using to make them phase and give them movement. Also, the snare have too much reverb, IMO.
    Otherwise, the sub is nicely placed and sound pretty good as well. And the intro ambiance is spot on!

    Back 2 Back:

    Very futuristic feel to it, I like that! But the lead synth seems a bit off to me. I mean, it should sound right in the feel of the track, but somehow it sounds like something that shouldn't be there, you know what I mean? Maybe this would work with something more "futuristic inspired", like the rest of the track.

    Those were my $.02.

    Keep it up, man!