The Sorrow (Liquid Dance Floor)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by equilibrium, Jul 18, 2012.

  1. equilibrium

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    Just looking for tips on what to do with this... let me know if you have any ideas on what to change and add to it?

    Definitely a bit repetitive, i feel like if i had vocals to work with it would help me figure out a structure to keep it interesting. Left space for vocals to go over it.

    Not a full song, tho.
     
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  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Have you heard your bass in monitors? I think you should smooth it out it sounds flabby and unpleasant. Also a little motion in the bass could not hurt. Drums are coming thru well. Intro is awesome vocals would do this song some justice.