its better than nu-breeds na blood track, not keen on the chorus,but i can see what your trying to do , if your trying to head into the mainsteam then you gotta make radio friendly stuff thats gunna sell to school kids. that isnt meant to be disrespectful either, this is where the money is.. can you imagine school kids playing this on their mobile phones ? yea i can.. as annoying as it is, thats where the mainstream fame builds .
not my style tho ..