The Feeling - Liquid Funk

[Surplus]

Easy guys, I've been making a lot of harder stuff recently so wanted to make something more mellow, this was the end result, still got a bit of an ugly mid bass but the rest is nice and lush and melodic. Would welcome all your feedback. Many thanks and peace.
https://soundcloud.com/surplus1/the-feeling

 

[smoothassilk]

Bass is nice and actually works quite well with the more uplifting sounds/vibes. Drums are also decent but could use more layers of cymbals and percussion.

For more melodic tracks you have to write better melodies and chords: it's kinda obvious that you don't have much experience doing this- iit's worth looking up music theory and analysing chord progressions from songs (not dnb!) you like.

You also loop things quite a lot. It gets a bit repetative. I think you need greater contrasts between the different 8 and 16 bar sections.

Sorry for being harsh, hopefully you should improve more this way.