The Feeling - Liquid Funk

smoothassilk

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Bass is nice and actually works quite well with the more uplifting sounds/vibes. Drums are also decent but could use more layers of cymbals and percussion.

For more melodic tracks you have to write better melodies and chords: it's kinda obvious that you don't have much experience doing this- iit's worth looking up music theory and analysing chord progressions from songs (not dnb!) you like.

You also loop things quite a lot. It gets a bit repetative. I think you need greater contrasts between the different 8 and 16 bar sections.

Sorry for being harsh, hopefully you should improve more this way.
 
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