The Feeling - Liquid Funk

Discussion in 'New Talent and Track Reviews' started by Surplus, Dec 19, 2014.

  1. Surplus

    Surplus Member

    Nov 17, 2014
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    Easy guys, I've been making a lot of harder stuff recently so wanted to make something more mellow, this was the end result, still got a bit of an ugly mid bass but the rest is nice and lush and melodic. Would welcome all your feedback. Many thanks and peace.
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  2. smoothassilk

    smoothassilk Active Member

    Aug 13, 2013
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    Bass is nice and actually works quite well with the more uplifting sounds/vibes. Drums are also decent but could use more layers of cymbals and percussion.

    For more melodic tracks you have to write better melodies and chords: it's kinda obvious that you don't have much experience doing this- iit's worth looking up music theory and analysing chord progressions from songs (not dnb!) you like.

    You also loop things quite a lot. It gets a bit repetative. I think you need greater contrasts between the different 8 and 16 bar sections.

    Sorry for being harsh, hopefully you should improve more this way.