Drum & Bass The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LIQUID

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  1. AcidShroom

    AcidShroom Member

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    Heyy,

    Thought that i'd take the whole day free for ableton and i'm really pleased with the result:



    I was stuck for like 4 hours and then things started rolling. Feedback would be highly appreciated!

    Cheers!! :D
     
  2. AcidShroom

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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    bump
     
  3. Entrada

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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    Sounds nice dude, think it would sound better with break beats though. Will just fill out the track a lot more (y)
     
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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    That's a big track man. I quite like the beats like that
     
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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    I guess its just maybe cause i started learning how to make breakbeats that i want them over everything :banana:.
     
  6. AcidShroom

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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    Thanks guys for the feedback! :D
    I feel that something is missing in the track
     
  7. smoothassilk

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    Re: The Day I'd Die I'm Coming For You <- too long name for a track but here it is LI

    I think the vocal needs to come through more, it gets a little lost in the mix and really in a track like this it needs to be central.