The Brick - First Dubstep Tune ever.(made in reason)

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  1. llSpaMll

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    So yeah, i made a dubstep track with that grimey bitcrushing goodness it's on the myspace labeled as [The brick - Dubstep]

    http://www.myspace.com/llspamll
     
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    daaaaaarkness. love it. make some more. make some more.
     
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    :D stellar ill get on it but i want more criticism then "wow good tunes" helps with motivation though these comments help with it too xD.
     
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    ok, well you could definately do with a little more variation in the drums, and there aint much in the way of sub bass..... thats all i can add.
     
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    i can totally fix both of those.
     
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    maybe its my speakers but the kick drum could do with more punch it was getting a bit lost later on in the other sounds.
    Other than that its not my kinda music so i cant comment on the style.
     
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    im digging the bass bro, think the kick and snare come thru really well, deffo needs more sub bass. and the higher freqs of the bass could come down a touch. but this is my sorta dubstep , keep it up
     
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    i'll be adding another sub to the bassline, it's got next to none atm cause of the bitcrushing it seems to ruin it somehow but ill get it down and ill eq that mid a bit more so it's a tad smoother.
     
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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    ouch thats a nasty one bruv!!

    definatly turn the distorted bassline down quite a bit and put a deep wobble sub bass in there would beef the fuck out of it.

    i really enjoyd the sound of the percussion. i would probably just throw some more sound effects in to keep it lively. pretty grusome track going on! good drop/
     
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    ill add a few more effects yeah for sure but by turn the distorted bassline down u mean the bassline or the distortion? n yeah i eq'd the bass for more sub but i was gonna add another sub in there for sure.