The Artifact

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by grorse, Oct 3, 2013.

  1. grorse

    grorse New Member

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    Hey guys please let me know what you think of my latest tune, constructive criticism is appreciated.
    Cheers!

     
  2. Mason John

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    Mmm, tasty and pretty finger lickin' good.

    I would maybe bring the congo beats out just a tad more every now and then when they appear. There's also a part w/ the leads coming in at around the 3:23-3:25 part; I'd personally put a bit more presence to them as well, and maybe also extend the ending just for one more loop automating to a close, but that's all. No major problems.

    That sub-bass is pretty juicy too. Kick is very solid. Good work.
     
  3. smoothassilk

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    Love it. I agree about the congas and maybe the vocals too need a bit of boosting.
     
  4. grorse

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    thanks a lot for the feedback guys, ill try bring the synths nd congas out a bit more.