Like the intro nice drums and soundscape- think the kick roll thing before the drop is a little bit off - maybe rework that. Drop has a nice impact- like the notation - nice and straightforward but it works. Also good movement work with the mids. Only thing I'd say is you could beef up the bass more - make it slightly less tinny in the high end- and get a bit more punch in the low, also maybe increase the sub level?
Very nice overall though, I would be very happy with this!