I like the resonant bass And I think the kick is fine but i'm not liking the snare Otherwise this as a nice groove going but it lacks atmosphere in the drop. You should drop some higher frequency content or something airy in the background. Otherwise this is a really nice track, good job mate!
I like the bass squeek. I think the bass could use more variation. The vocal is cool too but it could use some reverb delay just to fill it out a bit. I think your off to a great start. I think the kick is fine but there is something off in the tail of the snare.