DnB Taylor Swift - Shake it off (BFFL REMIX)

It feels so good
You lying here next to me
Oh, what a groove
You have no idea how it feels

My hands just won't keep still
I love you, baby
Oh, I love you, I love you, I love you
I just want to hold you

Run my fingers through your hair
Ooh
Outta sight
Uh-huh, right there, you like it like that

Closer
Come here, closer, close
Oh, baby
Oh, baby

Give it up, ain't no use
I can help myself if I'd wanted to
I'm hung up, no doubt
I'm so in love with you, for me there's no way out

Cause deeper and deeper
In love with you I'm falling
Sweeter and sweeter
Your tender words of love keeps calling

Eager and eager, yeah
To feel your lips upon my face
Please her and please her
Any time or any place

I'm gonna love you, love you, love you just a little more, baby
I'm gonna need you, need you, need you every day
I'm gonna want you, want you, want you in every way

Make no mistake for I'll hold back knowin'
This time it looks like lover is here to stay
As long as I shall live
I'll give you all I have and all I have to give

Cause please him and please him
Any time or any place
Eager and eager
To feel your sweet lips on my face

Deeper and deeper
In love with you I'm falling, yeah
Sweeter and sweeter
Your tender words of love keeps calling

I'm gonna love you, love you, love you just a little more, baby
I'm gonna need you, need you, need you every day
I'm gonna want you, want you, want you in every way
 
needs some work...

but it has potential.. somewhere... somehow...

maybe take a lil inspiration from this

 
Dieses Lied hat mich sehr introvertiert und rückwirkend feierliche Momente in meinem Leben, wo ich bessere Entscheidungen zu treffen hätte, wurde ein besserer Mensch, die richtigen Entscheidungen getroffen, wählen Sie den richtigen Pfad, doch letztlich wählte die Richtung direkt in die Unterwelt, die feurigen Tiefen des Luzifers Seele selbst... Dieses Lied hat mich wieder in das erste Mal, das ich Oralsex auf meine Tochter führte, ich rief & schlug sie & sagte ihr, sie war auch hübsch & Stimmen machte mich es tun, ich sperrte sie in einen Schrank für 3 Tage nur Rückkehr zum Urinieren im Haar... Es war zu diesem Zeitpunkt habe ich beschlossen, die "renovations" in den Keller... Dieses Lied verkörpert jene frühen Schritte, Verderbtheit, ich nahm & jetzt nicht zurückdrehen die Hand der Zeit auf... Du musst vorsichtig sein, mein Freund, du scheinst einschiffen werden auf einer Reise, die es kein zurück gibt, eine endlose, gewundene leere Straße von Hass, Wut & Verzweiflung...

Bitte, bitte, machen Sie nicht den gleichen Fehler habe ich!

Viel Glück auf deiner Reise wirst du es brauchen.

Ihnen hoffentlich

Josef
 
Cool man!
you need to up the production quality a bit, but you'll get that over time/experience.
i really like T Swifts "Trouble", cuz it's hitting a bit harder but still has those cheesy pop vox - ur remix reminds me of that!

oh and: if you keep all your remixes up on your SC acc, then it's just a question of time (and maybe follower count) 'til SC is banning you for
copyright infirngement...
 
This is not bad man and reasonable job on the mix. I feel you could do more with the vocals throughout the chorus, maybe mess about with some reverb and delay effects. In terms of balancing your subs could weigh in a bit more through the kick and also sub layer of your bass. I also think the vocals could punch through the mix a bit more!
 
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