Drum & Bass Taylor Swift - Shake it off (BFFL REMIX)

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  1. BFFL

    BFFL New Member

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    Hey Folks,
    I just released a new remix i made and i would love some feedback (O-O)
     
  2. Black Homo

    Black Homo Active Member

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    It feels so good
    You lying here next to me
    Oh, what a groove
    You have no idea how it feels

    My hands just won't keep still
    I love you, baby
    Oh, I love you, I love you, I love you
    I just want to hold you

    Run my fingers through your hair
    Ooh
    Outta sight
    Uh-huh, right there, you like it like that

    Closer
    Come here, closer, close
    Oh, baby
    Oh, baby

    Give it up, ain't no use
    I can help myself if I'd wanted to
    I'm hung up, no doubt
    I'm so in love with you, for me there's no way out

    Cause deeper and deeper
    In love with you I'm falling
    Sweeter and sweeter
    Your tender words of love keeps calling

    Eager and eager, yeah
    To feel your lips upon my face
    Please her and please her
    Any time or any place

    I'm gonna love you, love you, love you just a little more, baby
    I'm gonna need you, need you, need you every day
    I'm gonna want you, want you, want you in every way

    Make no mistake for I'll hold back knowin'
    This time it looks like lover is here to stay
    As long as I shall live
    I'll give you all I have and all I have to give

    Cause please him and please him
    Any time or any place
    Eager and eager
    To feel your sweet lips on my face

    Deeper and deeper
    In love with you I'm falling, yeah
    Sweeter and sweeter
    Your tender words of love keeps calling

    I'm gonna love you, love you, love you just a little more, baby
    I'm gonna need you, need you, need you every day
    I'm gonna want you, want you, want you in every way
     
  3. Hannah Wants

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    Hannah wants this release!
     
  4. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    needs some work...

    but it has potential.. somewhere... somehow...

    maybe take a lil inspiration from this

     
  5. jmzmaloney

    jmzmaloney ENTHUSED WITH ETHNOGRAPHIC PLUNDERPHONICS Staff Member

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    I like it. People say the word mastrrpiece gets used too much, I think this time its fully justified
     
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  6. BFFL

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    Thanks so much guys <3
     
  7. hazdaman100

    hazdaman100 Bum 'n Face

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    shite mate
     
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  8. Josef Fritzl

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    Dieses Lied hat mich sehr introvertiert und rückwirkend feierliche Momente in meinem Leben, wo ich bessere Entscheidungen zu treffen hätte, wurde ein besserer Mensch, die richtigen Entscheidungen getroffen, wählen Sie den richtigen Pfad, doch letztlich wählte die Richtung direkt in die Unterwelt, die feurigen Tiefen des Luzifers Seele selbst... Dieses Lied hat mich wieder in das erste Mal, das ich Oralsex auf meine Tochter führte, ich rief & schlug sie & sagte ihr, sie war auch hübsch & Stimmen machte mich es tun, ich sperrte sie in einen Schrank für 3 Tage nur Rückkehr zum Urinieren im Haar... Es war zu diesem Zeitpunkt habe ich beschlossen, die "renovations" in den Keller... Dieses Lied verkörpert jene frühen Schritte, Verderbtheit, ich nahm & jetzt nicht zurückdrehen die Hand der Zeit auf... Du musst vorsichtig sein, mein Freund, du scheinst einschiffen werden auf einer Reise, die es kein zurück gibt, eine endlose, gewundene leere Straße von Hass, Wut & Verzweiflung...

    Bitte, bitte, machen Sie nicht den gleichen Fehler habe ich!

    Viel Glück auf deiner Reise wirst du es brauchen.

    Ihnen hoffentlich

    Josef
     
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  9. BFFL

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  11. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    you have our opinions..

    remix it brah
     
  12. Neurogrind

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    Cool man!
    you need to up the production quality a bit, but you'll get that over time/experience.
    i really like T Swifts "Trouble", cuz it's hitting a bit harder but still has those cheesy pop vox - ur remix reminds me of that!

    oh and: if you keep all your remixes up on your SC acc, then it's just a question of time (and maybe follower count) 'til SC is banning you for
    copyright infirngement...
     
  13. Misti

    Misti Faunix Audio Mastering

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    This is not bad man and reasonable job on the mix. I feel you could do more with the vocals throughout the chorus, maybe mess about with some reverb and delay effects. In terms of balancing your subs could weigh in a bit more through the kick and also sub layer of your bass. I also think the vocals could punch through the mix a bit more!
     
  14. Josef Fritzl

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    I like it. I'd probably shorten the snare sound so it doesn't have that second "slapping" sound right afterwards in the reverb.