Tatilla - Kill the Duppy Roots

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by RevTech, Oct 29, 2009.

  1. RevTech

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    http://www.reverbnation.com/Tatilla

    Look for it.


    Now I need your help, I'm going to sell this one later on, and I need to clear the copyrights and I need to make it perfect. Any suggestions? Maybe about the song structure?
     
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    If you recognize the vocals, tell me where they are from as I forgot
     
  3. fisher

    fisher I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    get rid of that synth and it might be alright, sounds like some shit bag pipes
     
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    needs more microkorg!!!!!! and possibly a bit of cowbell as well :)
     
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    ok.

    first off. what vocal? secondly, you wont be able to sell it. it isnt good enough. sounds too "flat", you got way to much reverb on your snare. that basssound is too basic. hats need some more layers.

    basicly you got A LOT to do before this is even anywhere near sellable.

    no offence btw, just wanted to get you back to the ground. it isnt that bad, but not good either.
     
  6. RevTech

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    True words.

    Though my bassline isn't that basic at all, maybe the notes are.

    And yeah, I didn't sell it so it's all good.