take it away- liquid dnb. looking for feedback to finish track

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  1. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin .

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    ez guys.
    this is one of the many tracks that seem to sit untouched but iv been having a go at getting on with it.
    would be good to know what you think... does the vocal sample fit for example cos i recorded that through my headphones.. so thats a bit not sure!

    http://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo/take-it-away-1

    thanksss
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    kick and snare sound overcompressed and lost in high frequencies. Try to fix that adding new layers... keep on it, the idea is very good
     
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    Thanks man. I thought they were maybe a bit too punchy and looud.. Never know these things until someone else points them out sometimes though
     
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    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    Don't bring the hat in straight away, or just turn it's levels down alot, the snare sounds a bit flat, and I think I hear a really really high piano note which is too quiet? Everything seems good though
     
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    i would introduce the vocals in the intro already. and i agree with whas said, the kick and snare really arent there already, they sound to dull. i would change the hats in the intro aswell.

    nice ideas going on, very varied and stuff. keep at it!
     
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    EvezDroppin .

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    cheers man. yeh im never big on intros... most liquid tracks will have a 64 bar intro etc but i prefer a track ot just go into the bassline.
    yeh the snare is a bit flat... i will take all this onboard thanks man!

    ---------- Post added at 10:04 ---------- Previous post was at 10:03 ----------

    thanks for checking im gna see what I can do about the drums and hats!
     
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    this is alright man, melody is nice, i like the distorted bass that fades in.

    beat is really letting this down tho man, snare is way too weak
     
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    EDITED: final version will be up in seperate topic
     
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