Jazzy
I like the gated Organ Bass.... I can't tell on these headphones if the sub is adequate or not... sounds like it's hitting, but I can't really tell.
1:27..... hmmm, interesting changeup.. didn't see that coming.
2:12 - 2:25 I think you need something else going on during this spot to help build up the tension.
Another thing I noticed is there aren't any big Cymbals (i.e. crashes) going on... and with that Brass riff being so prominent, I really think you need some crashes here and there... especially on the 1s.
At 2:25, I'd definitely introduce a new element or two to help spice things up.
neat tune, flesh it out!