T Leaf - As We Spin (liquid?)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by T Leaf, Oct 1, 2009.

  1. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    Hey guys its been a while (since i don't have monitors atm.)

    I can only produce sketches at the minute :(

    but here is one i am happy with :D

    http://soundcloud.com/t-leaf/t-leaf-as-we-spin

    i only wish i could finish some of these tracks off or at least comment constructively on other peoples work :(

    (y)
    Cheers

    The Leaf
     
  2. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    sounding not bad at all. could need a lot more bass tho! vocal is nice, but beats could be "more" .. ^^

    finish it! :D
     
  3. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Sounds ok for a sketched out piece. Does need a bit more bass (way down subway) and quite a bit of eq-ing, but I'm sure you'll sort that out when you can hear it properly.
    The end product should be quite nice.
     
  4. GiDriK

    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    vocal is wickid and delayed "blips" r heavy, phatten up the drums and one moar thing.. WHERE IS THE SUUUUUBBASSS? :D
     
  5. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    definatly wicked productions. looking forward to the finished product.

    (high end is too much)
     
  6. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    more bass! u always got interestin melodies going on, like how theyre not predictable. like the slidey synth coming in towards the end. could phatten up the drums a little, or if not make the shaker a bit mor edynamic? like sidechain compress or something? shame bout ur monitors man!
     
  7. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Mmmmm, pretty Organ riff coupled with a lovely delayed lead line. The vocal is not my cup, but I like the uplifting type feel of the track. One idea to make the bass hit harder would be to layer your current bass with the same midi riff but pitched down one Octave... and maybe run that pitched down midi riff through a simple Sine wav patch.
     
  8. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    I've updated the track, its not the final or monitor accurate at the moment. i have made the bass a bit bigger and added extra drum work to make them a bit more hench than before.

    http://soundcloud.com/t-leaf/t-leaf-as-we-spin

    thanks for all your help guys
     
  9. rob_del_terror

    rob_del_terror - ̿ ̿'̵͇̿̿з=(•̪●)=ε

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    i'm no good for technical support but, i'll do as best i can..

    love the bassline you got goin on, but it needs to come out a little more. i'd say a little more grimy on top, a little heavier on the sub. the vocals arent my thing but i think they definitely work well within the tune. its got loads of potential, the word to describe it would be 'flat'. everything is right. just that it needs to jump out of the speakers a little more.

    what do y use for production?