Drum & Bass Symphorax - Memories Last Forever

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Symphorax, Oct 14, 2013.

  1. Symphorax

    Symphorax New Member

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  2. Pyrococcus

    Pyrococcus Urban Break Twister

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    Cheery and upbeat, yet serene..
    Criticism only regarding the arrangement - for 3:33 length, the long break is not strong enough and the dance parts too short in relation to intro, breaks and outro.
     
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  3. Mania

    Mania i fukin wot m8

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    Sounds sweet as man, great job. Mixed very nicely. Maybe try out some different chords changes for size.
     
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    good job ) I like the overall vibe and production. The only thing I would change is arrangement. I would make this track a bit longer and get rid of very long breaks, like the one in the middle. Maybe add one or two additional instruments to make the second part more fresh.
     
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    Yeah, I always struggle with arrangements. Any ideas how to make breaks stronger?

    Thanks a lot for the tips! Appreciate that!

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    Thank you sir!

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    Yeah, the break is a bit lifeless. Arrangement definitely needs some work.
    Thanks for your feedback!