Sweaty Teddy - Ruins, new heavy dnb tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sweaty Teddy, May 8, 2014.

  1. Sweaty Teddy

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    Please let me know feedback on mixdown and general song structure
     
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    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    That buildup feels a bit out of place whilst I'm listening to it.
    Or it's just my preference for weird music speaking.

    Not quite sure yet.
    But the rest is nice! : D
     
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    I would personally shorten the intro a bit, on one point I was not sure if that was the main part, or if it was still the intro..
    The piano/rhodes (not sure?) that comes in the drop feels a bit weird... A piano in the middle of distortion and filth..
    Although the drop was nice! the sounddesign is fine, drums same, no remarks on that (maybe a bit of heavy weight to the kick)
    the second half time drop was cool. But it felt a bit empty, don't know why..
     
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    Cheers for feedback, I feel the intro needs a bit of changing but generally like the feel of it, not sure what piano you're on about? It's the same instrument through the intro playing that little bit, meant to be a sitar haha. Know what ya mean about the second drop, could do with more filling out, not too sure how though