Sweaty Teddy- Piano song (Help needed)

[Sweaty Teddy]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/9sd036

Not finished yet but I don't like it once the drums speed up, would appreciate advice on what to do to make it sound better.

 

[Sweaty Teddy]

no one? laaaame

 

[LiAmP]

not tu bad m8

id say it would be better not havein the piano so slow or changing it when it kicks in

safe

 

[msmith222]

i would disagree with LiAmP on this one. i think the intro is perfect. i was listening on laptop speakers and the intro blew me away. i creates just the right amount of suspense, but i agree with you that the drop doesn't deliver yet. my opinion is that your drums are completely brutal in the intro, but that break that is layered in weakens them when it hits. i think it almost sounds a bit like a video game. i would recommend looking for a "rougher" set of layers for the full kit.

keep working on it, if you can dial it in and make the body match the intro, this will be a devastating track.

 

[Sweaty Teddy]

Thanks man, I will try get beef up the drums a bit when it kicks in.