I feel this track could benefit from two things:
1. Better sound design. Your bass is a bit phasey and doesn't really wow me that much.
2. More repetetiveness within sections, then more contrasting change ups, if that makes sense. If you have the same 1 or 2 bar break for 8 or 16 bars, then it'll have a bigger impact when you change up for a different one, or add in a fill.