Sunder - Rise Up

smoothassilk

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This is pretty good, the basses are really nice and well done, and it's rhymically good too.

Maybe the snare needs a bit more room around it, it's playing with the bass and some of the hits get covered a bit.

I feel like the builds needs more work, they're just a bit meh at the moment and there's not a lot of sense of building apart from the obvious kick kick kick kick kikikikikikiki etc. Also maybe the wobbles in the build aren't a great element, I'd find something else to put in there instead.

Piano part should be a smidge louder and I think you should develop it a bit more from a two bar loop, cause it's a good part with potential.
 

maschinistom

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Hi sunder, thanks for joining this producer forum. Your tracks sounds solid to me, good mix and rhythmically advanced, interesting vibe to it. Good tune!
 
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