Sunder - Rise Up

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sunder, Aug 9, 2016.

  1. Sunder

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    My last track I did is below if anyone fancies a listen.

    Currently finishing up a follow up EP and will be getting that on here in the next few weeks. Will go through and check out some of your guys stuff, I want to see what everyone's up to creatively over here.



    Take it easy,

    Sunder
     
  2. smoothassilk

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    This is pretty good, the basses are really nice and well done, and it's rhymically good too.

    Maybe the snare needs a bit more room around it, it's playing with the bass and some of the hits get covered a bit.

    I feel like the builds needs more work, they're just a bit meh at the moment and there's not a lot of sense of building apart from the obvious kick kick kick kick kikikikikikiki etc. Also maybe the wobbles in the build aren't a great element, I'd find something else to put in there instead.

    Piano part should be a smidge louder and I think you should develop it a bit more from a two bar loop, cause it's a good part with potential.
     
  3. maschinistom

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    Hi sunder, thanks for joining this producer forum. Your tracks sounds solid to me, good mix and rhythmically advanced, interesting vibe to it. Good tune!