Drum & Bass Sunday Morning (liquid / chill dnb)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fatkidscantjump, Mar 18, 2013.

  1. Fatkidscantjump

    Fatkidscantjump Member

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    hey guys, a little something i've been working on this past weekend. Not really finished so I would love to have some feedback on what I could improve / add etc.



    have a nice week everyone :)
     
  2. Mr_DnB

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    Hey ,

    i listened this on sunday yesterday and it was pretty nice :D
    Now I´ve had a closer look. First some criticism: The volume changes of the bassline are a little bit annoying for me.

    Some Suggestions: How about a piano sound with a bit more high frequencys? I mean the piano which plays the chords.
    Maybe it would sound cool if you put 2 further chords in at 1:00 (like @3:01). I hope you can imagine what I´m trying to say but my english is pretty awesome at the moment :D
     
  3. alcaponeuk

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    drums are mint, its weird listening to such minimal tune where theres no thump in the kick or snare, but i guess sacrificing the lows for the flashy synths and cool sounds are what the crack is with liquid n minimal, sounds ultra ultra ultra clean! not really a criticizm i can make (theres an eerie bubbly really fast synth playing arpeggios in the background, id bring that forward abit, cause thats crazy sick)
     
  4. Fatkidscantjump

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    hey guys, thanks for the feedback
    here is a new version : i tried to bring up a little bit the kick and the bubbly synth, along with a second part with a long attack guitar sound, would love to have some feedback on the mix and on the overall track

     
  5. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Some real nice melodies in here, definately a sunday afternoon relaxed vibe about this. Reckon the kick and snare could do with a touch more body to them. But apart from hat this is nice.
     
  6. winepunk

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    really nice chilled vibe. I've only got the headphones on so cant really judge the mix atm.
     
  7. DjSammy-T

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    This track is great. I love the melodies and the synth work. Your fixes on the drums made the world of difference. The snare sits perfectly but the kick could come out a tad more (on my monitors anyway), just so you can feel it. It isn't a harsh kick so I think you will get away with cranking it a little. Also your percussive elements seem to be a little harshly low cut, give them a slight roll of rather than a straight cut, it will help them sound a little better a get rid of the harsh frequencies that cut through.

    Hope this helps some :)