summertime blues

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by groelle, May 14, 2009.

  1. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    Some cool ideas bro. I'd say re arrange the riff a little so its not doing the same throughout the track. Add a bit more atmosphere aswell I reckon. Second drop was pretty nice, but you could probably work on it a little more. All in all good stuff Groelle. I look forward to hearing the finished product mate.
     
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    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    Agreed there's some good ideas there mate!
    A few alterations an maybe a delay on the main stabs comin on an off would give it some variation.
    Seems a bit slow? Wat bpm is this? imo if it was faster it might give it a different feel?
    The reverse snare at the drops needs to be turned down a little, its a bit in your face.
    But i like the ideas you got just needs a bit more work here n there, that main filtered bassline sounds a bit cheap imo cant really think of any suggestions on how to make it different all i can say is i look forward to hearin more mate keep at it broski!
    Peace!
     
  4. groelle

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    tried a delay on the stabs, but didnt work out how to make it sound better :D

    its 170 bpm, dont think that it needs to be faster, could give it a go, tho.

    and with the "cheap" sounding bassline - no matter what i do to it it always starts soundign worse ^^

    thanks for your time! :)
     
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