summertime blues

[groelle]

a nearly finished new bit from me. had some really nice workflow this time and im quite impressed with the outcome.
feedback of all sorts is greatly appreciated!

thx

http://www.zshare.net/audio/600256345e74ddce/

 

[$marty]

Some cool ideas bro. I'd say re arrange the riff a little so its not doing the same throughout the track. Add a bit more atmosphere aswell I reckon. Second drop was pretty nice, but you could probably work on it a little more. All in all good stuff Groelle. I look forward to hearing the finished product mate.

 

[Sammy Dexcell]

Agreed there's some good ideas there mate!
A few alterations an maybe a delay on the main stabs comin on an off would give it some variation.
Seems a bit slow? Wat bpm is this? imo if it was faster it might give it a different feel?
The reverse snare at the drops needs to be turned down a little, its a bit in your face.
But i like the ideas you got just needs a bit more work here n there, that main filtered bassline sounds a bit cheap imo cant really think of any suggestions on how to make it different all i can say is i look forward to hearin more mate keep at it broski!
Peace!

 

[groelle]

tried a delay on the stabs, but didnt work out how to make it sound better

its 170 bpm, dont think that it needs to be faster, could give it a go, tho.

and with the "cheap" sounding bassline - no matter what i do to it it always starts soundign worse ^^

thanks for your time!

 

[groelle]

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