hey man, first of all great idea! this has a bit of a computer game vibe to it i can imagine playing wipeout to it or something!
i know its pretty jump up but i think you need to think a bit more about how your sounds sit together, everything is very up front and punchy which is good as it shows youve got skills but i think you could blend your sounds together better to make it fit together. the biggest issue in this track for me is that your lead sound is really trebley, you could probably beef up the bottom end and maybe even knock the whole thing down an octave and it would solve 2 problems at the same time, your tune would have more low end grunt and it would sound less trebley.
looking forward to hearing the completed track man