Subtitude - Left aside

[BLoodstaiN`]

Updated version, Compressed the bass more, tried to make the drums less flat, decompressed the snare a bit.
i hope you like it

https://soundcloud.com/subtitude%2Fleft-aside-final-version

It's liquid, hope you enoy it, Feedback is much appreciated!

 

[groelle]

intro doesnt work well imo. that melody isnt too bad, but that sound just doesnt cut it on its own. drums sound somewhat flat and overcompressed (esp the snare).

bassline is too loud aswell imo. you got some good ideas, but this is far away from sounding finished. maybe spend a little more time on each track?

big ups.

 

[BLoodstaiN`]

intro doesnt work well imo. that melody isnt too bad, but that sound just doesnt cut it on its own. drums sound somewhat flat and overcompressed (esp the snare).

bassline is too loud aswell imo. you got some good ideas, but this is far away from sounding finished. maybe spend a little more time on each track?

big ups.

what do you exactly mean with flat?

Thanks for the feedback btw

 

[dj cluster]

Piano + Pad= Too High freq, The sound is distorted
pad: sound off key

Nice ideas dude but, as groelle say, need to spend more time for each track, especially for the equalization...

 

[BLoodstaiN`]

http://soundcloud.com/subtitude/left-aside-final-version
Updated version
if you could have a listen that would be great ^^