Drum & Bass Subtitude - Claymore WIP

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  1. BLoodstaiN`

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    Have listen, and pleeeeaaaaaasssseeeeeee leave a comment and feedback!
    Is highly appreciated, 'Cause to me this is my most promising project so far.
     
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    i like the drum roll, i dont really like the happy synth riddim intro.

    i like the energy in this piece i think the drums are great but i dont like the simple way youve used the synths really its very sort of video game old school sounding you know?? what artists are you trying to make a sound like?
     
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    I'm aiming for Sort of Jump Up,
    don't really have an artist i'm trying to be like, I just want very energetic songs, because i myself enjoy such songs the most, unless i'm a chilled out mood.
    Yeah that was the thing i was afraid of, my synth use, were all synths that in my opinion were pretty good sounding and i threw 'em all in ;p
     
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    oh shit sorry i didnt realize it was jump up man, its kinda dancefloor aswell i think which is cool, the drums are sweet i reckon u cud make the bline dirtier and get some sound effects or samples in there
     
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    ThePapa Suffragette City..

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    Love the synth man! Nice beats as well. Great effort.
     
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    what is a bline? I'm from belgium, i'm sorry
     
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    bassline sorry, i reckon you need a real dirty bass for jump up
     
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    Will look into it
     
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    There's nothing wrong with being from Belgium Bloodstain. Dont let anyone tell you otherwise.
     
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    meh at the end of the day man make the sound you want i just thought i might pitch in my ideas for what jump up ive heard has a range of different bass sounds and they have different distortions and chorus and all types of shit, but then again i think you are doing something more original and have to do your own thing
     
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    I think it sounds very thin, nearly 8bit those synths u use, not really feelin that
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    needs more bass, beef up what you have there now, make it dirtier and this culd b pretty fat! nice ideas, but as fishy says, very thing sounding, i like the synth lines n perc, just needs more Beef
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I will describe my opinion with a euphemism. It is like you made a baked ziti and forgot to add the seasonings. It still taste good but there is something missing that could make it real good. What that is I not completely sure. Any way I would be jumping around to this song. Props
     
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    Haha nice metaphor.
    That's why it's still a wip mate.
    But thanks for the feedback :)