Stumped at the worst time! Need some advice/direction.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by njsdca, Apr 17, 2010.

  1. njsdca

    njsdca Member

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    Hey people!

    So I've kinda started on this idea and have been sitting on it for couple of weeks messing around with it, anyway I need some advice on what I can add to make it really bring out some feeling. It's so flat and monotonous at the moment that I just can't figure out what to do.

    ALL feedback, good or bad is very much appreciated, this is my first stab at production and I am using Ableton Live 8 with just a keyboard and mouse.

    Thanks again!

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    http://soundcloud.com/exec/untitled-beginning
     
  2. Tronix

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    man this tune screams Sublow moving bass need abit more varity with the vocal mabye but sound good start ;) dreamy
     
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    its nice man, i agree with tronix that some moving bass (any kind, doesnt have to be a super twisty reece, could be 303 warps or whatever really) would fit like a glove and of course more variation with the drums
     
  4. njsdca

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    Thanks guys!

    Gonna try out some cool reeces and maybe try and get it to sound like it's resonating? The drums are definitely pretty lame, but who knows what can come of it... first track is always the fun one :D