Stinger Fingers (Drum & Bass) after suggestions applied

Discussion in 'Production' started by MC_Abyss, May 5, 2012.

  1. MC_Abyss

    MC_Abyss Member

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    I'm Looking for input on this song please tell me +or- things I wanna hear it all thanx






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  2. MisterApe

    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    Only thing I don't like is that it's a bit repetitive.
    Give it some structure! :)
     
  3. neddez

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    learn to layer stuff so its sounds fatter
    (eg take the synth lead and bounce it, then add a lil distortion/reverb/etc to the bounced copy and low/high pass it)
    the bassline isnt very subby so i'd bounce it and parallel compress the sh1t out of the copy, and then lowpass it @ 60hz

    learn to make things stereo

    like ape said it's repetitive as fvck man, twist that sh1t up son

    i really like the twinkly synth that comes in at 0.28

    i also like the break, congrats for doing something different there, but it needs to be louder

    i like the track name so +1 and +2 points for the MJ gif
     
  4. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    But -15 for posting in the wrong section!