Still learning
- Thread starter Madd Maxx
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CTJake
Och aye
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- Jun 13, 2015
- Location
- Perth, Western Australia
Nice work 
I'd say all in all it's a little repetitive for me, but this could be personal preference; I'd at least try throwing a few extra notes in on the piano here and there to keep it interesting. You've also got a lot of room in the intro to play around with completely filtering the drums out and letting the piano/pads carry the flow for a few bars, or switching up your drumline to have some sort of fill or even to be cut entirely at the end of phrases to create a little tension. Your bass is nice and warm, I can't help but feel it could use a little distortion on the mids/highs to give it a bit of an air over the top, especially if you can get this moving in a similar fashion to the sub with a bit of stereo movement. Just spit-balling here, but once again, nice work!
I'd say all in all it's a little repetitive for me, but this could be personal preference; I'd at least try throwing a few extra notes in on the piano here and there to keep it interesting. You've also got a lot of room in the intro to play around with completely filtering the drums out and letting the piano/pads carry the flow for a few bars, or switching up your drumline to have some sort of fill or even to be cut entirely at the end of phrases to create a little tension. Your bass is nice and warm, I can't help but feel it could use a little distortion on the mids/highs to give it a bit of an air over the top, especially if you can get this moving in a similar fashion to the sub with a bit of stereo movement. Just spit-balling here, but once again, nice work!Similar threads
