State - Digital Distress (WIP)

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  1. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Any thoughts on this one? The intro is a bit mish mash at the moment but it shouldnt be a bad problem to sort, im on a mission for the perfect minimal vocal tooo. may take a while. production feedback would be helpful. cheers.

    http://www.reverbnation.com/mike001


    Tune is slightly updated now....improved mixdown...
     
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  2. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Niice! Liking the intro, jazzy and stabby.. tres minimal :)
    first drop is ace!
    drums seem tight (if a little rigid)
    bass is there, without overbearing.
    synth is a little quiet for my taste.

    wicked start though- loads of potential!
     
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    eXyZe !ONGELEGEN!

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    Not my style, but u are doing it good. Imo the bass is a bit too loud. Bring up the synth a bit.
     
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    Ketz Thinkin outside the box..

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    wicked vibe here, nice solid beat - good job man! :)
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Cheeaaars for the responses boys, i'll re-post the finished product.
     
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    Like the bassline mate, buildup was strong 2, wich program do u use?
    Damn nice beat mate, love that bassline, how do you make one like taht so that it is streaming, without really stoping u know?
    Like u raise the release of it? need a baaslline like that.
    Propz
     
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    subprime Dysjoint

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    Love the vibe man. The intro was great, coulda listened to it longer before it dropped.
     
  8. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Using fl mate, im not sure what you mean by streaming bass but the sub has had a cut at 30Hz and layered with some organic bass, then brickwalled... with some other bass elements too.

    cheers man.
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    The finished track will have a longer intro, cheers for the feed.
     
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    Thanx mate, will try some stuff. Usin FL 2
    Can i add ur msn?

    cheers
     
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  11. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    dude, might want to remove your email and pm state instead.
    Spam bots/spiders will be sending you penis enlargement emails sooner than you might imagine otherwise :D
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    yeah i'll PM you.