Start Of First Liquid Tune - Newbie

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by mathmos, Jan 16, 2010.

  1. mathmos

    mathmos Member

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    What do you think?

    http://soundcloud.com/diplomatic/1st-experiment

    This is my first experiment, so I know its pretty crap Im using Fruity loops 8.


    I have only done about a minute, and am wondering if I should bother carrying on? to me it sounds ok, but thats probably because I have listened to it about 100 times


    Opinions please

    Thanks
    Dipo
     
  2. drp81

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    like the old school feel goin on in there, def worth carrying on with even if only to further your knowledge of fl studio!

    lots of potential to play about with
     
  3. mathmos

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    Yeh, will carry it on.

    Shall I remove that repetitive start melody or transform it later in the song?
     
  4. demonicdnb

    demonicdnb got duct-tape?

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    hell, its soundin pretty good to me. that pad is real nice, and I like the feel of the hats.
    the bass comes in a little strong in the mix, slightly distorted, but you should stay on this.
     
  5. demonicdnb

    demonicdnb got duct-tape?

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    maybe go for the ol' in n out sidechained compressor effect.