Start of a new tune

[Jungles]

I just started working on a new tune so i was wandering what you think of it. It's 112 kbps, 1.00 mb and around 1:00 mins long.

 

[Affliction]

The cowbell is a bit monotonous, sounds more like a metronome tbh.
The chopped up beats are hard to follow, maybe you're deviating a little bit too far from the 2-step pattern - or not returning to it at the right moments. You need to give the listener subtle cues so they can keep time nicely.

On the plus side, i like the 'feel' of the track

 

[Jungles]

Thanks for pointers, man. That was just what i needed to continue working on this tune. But i got to tell you, i love that kind of complex and unexpected beats. Any others?

 

[Affliction]

But i got to tell you, i love that kind of complex and unexpected beats. Any others?

Yeah i see your point , perhaps you need to add in some extra things to mark the start \ end of the bars\regions. A cymbol crash is a good example... the broken beats will probably make more 'sense' if the bars are clearly defined with other things...

 

[Jungles]

I'm already on it. Thanks for your time.

 

[juniorbeatbox35]

i really like how when the drums come in they keep having u guess when their gunna hit... and when they do hit u get a little surprised... i like that :]

 

[Jungles]

Thanks. I didn't have much time to work on it, but i will definitely finish a tune when i find some time.

 

[juniorbeatbox35]

im excited to hear he final project... PM me it wen u finish so i can load it to my ipod right away

 

[RAkoon]

hmmm not much to listen to but the break is workin for me... not really the pattern but sound is ok imo... abit more layerin btw... I think U should work on that non 2step beat... like drumfunk... not so techstep like...

peace. respect.

 

[Jungles]

work on that non 2step beat... like drumfunk... not so techstep like....

My thoughts exactly. I will work on it but in lack of time atm (college exams, work,...)