[ Dont apologize for being honest, It helps people grow. I'll have some new tunes for you to check out soon. i'm actually big into making dnb tunes with movements in them. one of those tracks is Target Practice. I'll post it on here soon as long with Memoria(TiTaN). P's
The production/engineering here is pretty good until the sniper comes in - sounds over compressed and clipped out, and the sub clips out as well. I'd say fix the mix, as the distorted result sounds terrible. I don't like how the sniper break drops out for a moment, because the other break is way quieter, and it ends up being a big momentum killer. This might be too by-the-numbers for most - Sniper+Reece+Sub and dark effects. Again, no melody or hook to make this different from other similar tearouts.