SOUND THE ALARM TUNE!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by technic1210, Jun 18, 2009.

  1. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    Heres another track i made with reason a few months back,quite basic but sometimes simplicity works.Some feedback if possible,and cheers to all those who gave feedback on my other tune.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/61541750a7bab814/
     
  2. MiloParsons

    MiloParsons 16 year old fanatic.

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    Need to build up an intro more. Try and fade in some synths at the start because there is not real drop in the song. Otherwise good sounds (y)
     
  3. Ribs Mcoy

    Ribs Mcoy New Member

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    Sounding good! i disagree. i think it doesnt need much of a drop. Its simple and that whats good about it. I use reason to produce aswell, what synth you using for that great bass?
     
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    I would have quite liked it if it dropped around 2:45 to 3:00, or at least changed up a gear. But that's just taste. I felt the kick could have cut through a bit more. It was fine but it didn't WOW me at any point. More +ve than -ve.
     
  5. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    bass is phat!

    Nice slow burning intro, I don't think a drop is needed per se, I like the slower tempo- makes it seem meaner and moodier :D

    Arrangement is quite sparse, but I can see where you are coming from.
    Good job!
     
  6. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    thanks for the comments all,i made it in a few days and sorta moved on from it maybe ill come back and add a bit more,oh and the bass was made with malstrom initialized patch then load to sawtooths detune oscillators a and b and mess with filter etc.
     
  7. eXyZe

    eXyZe !ONGELEGEN!

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    like the vibe is has! No need for intro imo, but maybe an outro, it stops too ubruptly. Like someone else said, u should make the kick cut thru better. U could, if u haven't already split the bass into low and hi, then treat both differently. The sub will be less muddy. Good luck.
     
  8. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    well im using reason at the mo and have no idea how to do that unless i duplicate the setup again which is easy enough.
     
  9. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    i like this. its a roller. i agree that this doesn't really need a drop. cos its progresses with slight builds and slow strip outs.

    nice piece. yeh bass is hench
     
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    i like it man good job. i like the drums alot keep at it
     
  11. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    quite like this mate!!
    bass is nasty! and adds to the already eary (if thats the word) mood of the track.
    good use of fx and samples too, fits in reli well and adds to the beat!
    drums could maybe be beefed up a tad, but then i always say that :D
    i cud listen to that bass over and over haha.
    wmmmmmmmmmwom!
     
  12. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    am chuffed with the comments it makes me wana keep at it.cheers all.