You are insane... you probably need to stop drinking JD and smoke bad crack... lol
J.J.(just joking)
It reminds me my favourite banger from
Current Value, "Running". Which I always love to drop in my live sets and leave an horrified crowd with some Skullstep... hehe
I like the energy on this your tune.
on advice side, the snare pattern it's not grooving to me, after 16 bars i get that feeling of humdrum.
While Stigma advice on kick pattern, my look is into the snare pattern.
it can be that you can change just little things into the pattern , like skip the snare in some bits, or change the pitch of it only for some hits inside the bar, instead of chanching the pitch for the whole bar.... I hope you get what i'm saying. I can't really explain myself.
But, yeah, find a way to make that snare more groovy and interesting.
You can probably add a couple of breaks underneath the main kick snare. And play in intervals between the main drum machine pattern and a distorterd break re-edited and retriggered ... so, kind of using some jungle tricks mixed with this sort of skullstep style you aim.
I undrstand you wanted to make it more interesting with the pitching, and I love your re-pitching snare style, but it's not enough at my end.
All of the above it's in the name of
IMO
For the rest, you are in a good tune!
)
but what did i expect 
