Sorry

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by IV4, Oct 29, 2012.

  1. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,160
    Likes Received:
    1,416
    Hi everybody
    Sorry everybody if I so shamelessly promote this song. I have never been so proud of a song, nor have I ever put up my one of my own songs to remix. You can download all the parts of my song on my soundcloud page. If you need any help with ANYTHING just ask. On that note if anyone would like to remix this song,{ or just take a part from it} the song is available for download. It is also split up with all the details on my souncloud page. Please let me know if you used it! I would also like to share it(with permission, on your soundcloud page) with everybody if you did a remix.
    As always, please tell me what you think about it. If the sucks, say so, if the song is good, say so, if you have any opinion at all tell me, even if you think I am better than you at producing. Your opinion still counts to me and helps me. In fact, you guys help me out more than any body, and for that I am ever grateful.

    I am finish with the soap box.
     
  2. pattycake

    pattycake Member

    Joined:
    Sep 19, 2012
    Messages:
    192
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Australia
    Your definitely improving but if this was my song i would try to take it further. There are some really good things in this track i would play around a bit more with the intro, kick drum roll sounds good but maybe you can get the drop to really explode, drums could use a bit more work the snare and kick sound right to me, maybe a little bit more punch and tail on snare. Also there is a bit too much high end hiss for me, cut everything above 15khz sometimes you can leave some really high end but most of the time it will sound bad when loud. The kick and snare sound great in intro and seem to lose a bit of impact its a hard thing to achieve but getting the energy level and punch to really hit after the drop is essential, i love the very quiet down sequence sound at 52-53 seconds i would make it louder and move it somewhere else where it can really shine! It sounds way better after i downloaded it really good work!
     
  3. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,160
    Likes Received:
    1,416
    I know what you mean about the high end hiss. I have everyting cut at 6khz but the hats and some how to many things take up so much room at the high end. Aaahh more work to be done :)
    I am not sure if I want to change the kick and snare. However, that is why I put the remix I really want to see what others could do with the track. It helps me learn a lot. And I kind of want to hear the snare with a differnet tail end;)

    Thank you pattycake for the great advice please make sure you post your remix I can't wait to hear.
     
    Last edited: Oct 29, 2012
  4. Skuff

    Skuff Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    1,039
    Likes Received:
    86
    Location:
    Essex
    Banger! I'll def have a go at this
     
  5. Nucleoid

    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

    Joined:
    Dec 20, 2011
    Messages:
    397
    Likes Received:
    11
    Location:
    Haarlem, Netherlands
    I like the bass a lot, but im not so sure on the drums, they could use some compression and processing imo
     
  6. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,160
    Likes Received:
    1,416
    Thanks guys.
     
  7. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    This is really good! I'm gonna tear this to pieces! be back soon with a remix for sure! What bpm and key?
     
    Last edited: Oct 29, 2012
  8. xiu

    xiu Member

    Joined:
    Nov 16, 2011
    Messages:
    139
    Likes Received:
    7
    Location:
    Bucharest
    where can i get the remix parts ? :D
     
  9. parsons19

    parsons19 Active Member

    Joined:
    May 15, 2011
    Messages:
    1,056
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    UK
    This is pretty cool man! :) Only have my laptop handy so ain't listening on fancy headphones or speakers I'm afraid, deffo sounds like good work though! :)
     
  10. bulletstorm

    bulletstorm Member

    Joined:
    Jun 15, 2011
    Messages:
    503
    Likes Received:
    9
    Location:
    netherlands
    very nice tune mate =)
    I downloaded the mix parts yesterday, maybe I'll have a go with a remix =)
     
  11. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,160
    Likes Received:
    1,416
    All the info is on my soundclound page underneath my finished version. I can not wait to hear the remixes!!!!!!!!!! You guys got me blushing like a shcool girl. Also the original is dowloable too if you want to use the bass with the lfo in the breakdown.
    I got to admit how excited I am to hear what others will do with essentially the same stuff. Thanks again guys.
     
  12. alcaponeuk

    alcaponeuk Member

    Joined:
    Jun 13, 2012
    Messages:
    351
    Likes Received:
    5
    giving noisia a run for there money here bro!
     
  13. Scrapped

    Scrapped Member

    Joined:
    Jun 28, 2012
    Messages:
    282
    Likes Received:
    10
    Location:
    New Zealand
    Liking the vibes man!! Awesome bass variations :)

    Great mix as well. Though....I feel like a sub bass with the bass could take it to another level! Just give it some more ooomf :p


    Just a thought..I like it anyway man!
     
  14. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,160
    Likes Received:
    1,416
    Me too!!!! That is why I have the remix. I learn from everyone here. Remix the song and show me some new tricks for resampling please. Come on scrapped help a friend out.
     
  15. D-Jhepz

    D-Jhepz ◕‿◕

    Joined:
    May 16, 2012
    Messages:
    2,196
    Likes Received:
    253
    Location:
    ╭∩╮(︶︿︶)
    DEFINITELY cant find the stems :confused:
     
  16. Djashleyp

    Djashleyp DJKomatose

    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2009
    Messages:
    217
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Birmingham
    I'll defo have a go at this! nice one mate!
     
  17. Skuff

    Skuff Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    1,039
    Likes Received:
    86
    Location:
    Essex
    I think there here mate.. Need to chop them all up yourself :cool:

     
  18. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

    Joined:
    May 23, 2011
    Messages:
    909
    Likes Received:
    68
    Location:
    A galaxy far, far away
    This is cool man! :D liking the plucked string-thingy, could have some more atmosphere to them tho, slight reverb and/or delay perhaps? Great work on the bass. Its really nice!

    Gj :)
     
  19. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    this is buggin the hell outta me dude........what tempo is it? I'm really struggling to get everything to sit in time with my own elements right now, and it's got huge potential, I dont wanna give up!
     
  20. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

    Joined:
    May 23, 2011
    Messages:
    909
    Likes Received:
    68
    Location:
    A galaxy far, far away
    It says 170 bpm on SC for this track atleast!