Sono Fabitch - Bad Bwoy Run

[Sono Fabitch]

Hi! I just started gettin' into DnB-producing. This is my first track: http://soundcloud.com/sono-fabitch/bad-bwoy-run-raw-version

I'd be pleased if you could tell me what you think of it and if you could give me some advice for improvement.

Thanks!

Sono Fabitch

 

[subprime]

The sound is pretty dated me thinks. I'm liking a few aspects of the tune, but tbh not for me.