Songwriting Question

sbstn

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Hi,

right now im trying to make dnb for quite a while now...
i started with the drums and i think my drums sound after a long time of try and error quite good

but evertime i try to move on to a bassline i fail o_O

i just dont know what i'm missing

i attached a beat of mine and a kind of reecy bassline i made to chop up and re arange

here is a 4 bar loop with sub i made

https://mega.co.nz/#!NlsXgDaL!EfSTxFEPRFlMKaXhXnjQgi9suMhMmbNSRPncwWj3EqA

and here a unchopped bass

https://mega.co.nz/#!cttizYqJ!QnlqtWkMT9TBf0OIa0VDc2teLD9ZKZl_sVtp9DBrfEo

thank you in advance for some tipps
 

Verva

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How long is a while? Them drums sound fine and the sub is good. That reece is pretty sick, listen to some spor and see what they do with the bass.
 
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drums are good, the first bass is weighty .... just need some mid-range growls .... some fx and your tune is good to go.... the second bassline is really quite sick. you just need to throw a load of sounds together ....... you just gotta find a nice groove!
 

sbstn

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I think i started about 2-3 years ago with producing music...but at first not really dnb

yeah the nice groove is kind of my problem but i'll think it is just more try and error .... o_O

thanks so far guys
 

dfault

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The most crucial thing I ever did with production was commit myself to finishing tunes. It really helps to go through the whole process over and over. It's really rewarding in the end.
 
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