song structure test

[BassLion]

sup guys im just after some feedback on my latest project.
the structure of it seems right but the snare seems a bit flat to me.
heres the little test i smashed together, ANY feedback is appreciated.
http://www.mediafire.com/?lzwjnjdfjxw

 

[harryp2000]

Nice mate loving those basses! Sweet synth changes, I think your drums sound nice mate, thats a punchy snare you got there!

I'm giong to upload a sample of a track by me in a bit, it'd be nice to hear what you think.

Harry

 

[BassLion]

Nice mate loving those basses! Sweet synth changes, I think your drums sound nice mate, thats a punchy snare you got there!

I'm giong to upload a sample of a track by me in a bit, it'd be nice to hear what you think.

Harry

thanks mate, ill have a listen =3

 

[Nosta]

I think you need some more cymbals in there (I realise you aint finished it yet) you've got something but there pretty quiet. add some more in there and a ride or something n put a bit of reverb on them give it more of a flow n fill out the sound a bit. the synths are nice! fit pretty nicely together. just a nice bit of sub bass n you got a nice track!