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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by boygo, Aug 2, 2013.

  1. boygo

    boygo I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Hi guys. I made some music and I wanna share it with you :p (Sorry for that shitty quality. I dunno why on SC my stuff always sounds worse than on computer.)


    I started producing dnb few weeks ago and this shit came out XD. I made it in 10 days and it's my first (in fact second but first own) dnb track. I compressed and tried to master it a bit (a bit too much i think, lol) but anyway, kick and snare are dubstep samples because when I was producing it, I didn't have any dnb samples which could satisfy me.

    Could you tell me what's good/bad and give some advices? It would be nicee. I know that for example paino is a bit too quiet (and too compressed maybe). :cool:


    And sorry for my english, I'm still learning.

    Cheers!
     
  2. stigma

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    That's really good for a first track! My first track was not as half as good:D As for critique, all the synths sound too loud. The sawish synth's melody doesn't really fit with the whole thing overall. Good luck on improving!:)
     
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  3. boygo

    boygo I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Thanks man. I also think that synths are too loud but it's hard for me to mix them good. I'm working on it. Maybe someone else will say someting? :razz:
     
  4. mugatu

    mugatu Verva Music

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    Yeah good for one of the first tracks! Got good track arrangements nice one mate.
     
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