something darker, bit old school

[Labrat]

so just some feedback on this one, probably wont finish unless people dig it but yeah some feedback would be great

https://soundcloud.com/figurative%2Fcant-finish-this-song-but-its-deep

 

[ali^]

really love your percussion work in this mate, sounds so nice and clinical. I can't really hear any bass though, what about some tunes 808 kicks knocking about? or maybe just a long rolling sub

 

[luciduk]

drums are cool man good to have something offbeat like this, background effects are there as well yeh i wud say needs more bass??

 

[jimjimjim]

really nice drums dude - but they seem a bit on their own - but hey i could listen to just drums all day
but most peeps need a bit more substance - beef up the other elements
nice and moody good job

 

[Labrat]

Thanks guys, yeah the bass is deep, like a low b or.e so.its pretty hard to hear, thanks for the feedback, should I make a new basssline?

 

[subprime]

Nice. Yeah the bass could probably be different but this is pretty sweet anyhow. I like the overall vibe and the drums.

 

[Labrat]

Thanks guys, I may work on this one some more, or just lift the drums and make a new tune

 

[Shadeslayer]

Keep working on this one, I say.

But yeah. No point having a bass so low it's almost impossible to hear. You may have brilliant sounds and melodies, but without the bass to glue them together, they're completely separated.
Love the percussion and background though. Might need a bit more body at some "empty" parts, but maybe the bass alone would be sufficient there.

Anyways keep it up. Loads of potential there.


~Shades out.

 

[Labrat]

Cheers guys, nice to know you guys are digging this

 

[Thin and crispy]

needed my sub on full to hear it, but it does have a nice sound, id say give it a bit more presence rather than change it, lovin the sound tho man

 

[chromey]

nice.
leave the existing bass there, cut off @ 40hz
layer in another bass a couple of octaves higher to complement and roberts your brothers father.
could maybe do with some vocal FX?...

existing fx and drums sound good!

 

[Labrat]

Cheers guys, this gives me a lot of motivation to get back on the pc and finish it