the intro bit where you first here the pads sidechaining with no kick, sounds a little off, maybe loosen the threshold of the compressor or something..
i think when the side stick came in it killed the mood a little, like the drums are fine, but they dont match the muffled, thick pads
possibly the kick could come through better, be a bit deeper
over all i guess its nice sounding, just maybe needs a rethink, seems a little odd to me, i do like it, i think it has potential but the elements not going together dont do it for me