Some opinions please

[Jomar1000]

http://soundcloud.com/jomar1000/jomar-burn

Here is a track i have made just wondering if you guys had any feedback??

 

[Scatcat]

sick ideas - drums could use a bit more power and variation

 

[logikz]

for a first track its great, but the leads are cheesy. wrong forum mate, use the new talent forums for your tunes please. or ill bloody delete everyone who replies to it and then whos going to look foolish.

 

[Jomar1000]

you?

 

[logikz]

yes.

 

[Jomar1000]

cheers for feedback though!! appreciate people taking time to listen!!

On a serious note what forums are you talking about? are there some more dedicated to track feedback as opposed to general production chit chat?

 

[logikz]

exactly, under the production forum there is yet another forum called 'new talent and track reviews'. ive moved the thread, just keep it in mind.