Some new liquid variant

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  1. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Any thoughts on this one? Ignore the vocals and arrangment, their going through an overhaul really soon. This is a young tune lol. cheers.

    The tune is called "No Going Back" --WIP--.

    http://www.reverbnation.com/mike001
     
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  2. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    really nice man...

    the synth and bass work nicely together, euphoric feelings man,

    im really feeling it man... i just think the beat needs a tiny bit more shuffle or rims? a bit more step? you know?

    the synth nd bass is bliss man
     
  3. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Perc sounds great! Nice and crisp. Cool pad, nice mod in the intro.

    (drop) - oooh, yes sir!! I'm not feeling the voc... I kind of am, but not really. That sub is nice though! right up my alley


    The prod sounds solid as can be, nice and level.
    :rock:
     
  4. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    cheers man. Dont worry bout the vocal, it aint staying lol.
     
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    wicked pads. i like
     
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    nice work, I`m not familiar with this style, I will be trying it out and listening more to it now tho.

    I feel the vocals do deffo have a place in this track, but I would rethink where and how you should use them.
    Nice overall sound, but I couldn`t comment too much on that as I`m not familiar with sub-genre of liquid.
    God I talk shite sometimes man, although I`m sure you`ll get my drift, lol.

    Keep it up
     
  7. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Nice one bud.

    Yeah liquid is good man, there's darker sides of it too (which im really feeling at the mo!).

    Here's a short list of producer's that im into right now, and some track names.

    Spectrasoul - "blood rain" loving this one.
    Break
    logistics - loving "dreamer of deams" and "no words" loads.
    Random movement! - check out "sabina"
    Mutt
    Laos

    OBviously i could be here all day mentioning names but these should be enough to give you the jist of things. thanks again mate.

    Later.
     
  8. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    dreamer of dreams is a fuckin TOOON


    together is best logistics song ever tho
     
  9. fr00tyfr3sh

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    One word and its: WOW!
    dreamtune m8, love most of those tunes btw.
    more pls
     
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    sounds good! id like some hi hat changes in there, apart from that, the drums sound crisp.

    dont think the vocal is too bad in there. maybe just redoing it would be enough.

    good work, hope that youll finish this one!!
     
  11. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    O thanks man. Yeah i will be finishing this one.

    The drums have an extra bit of depth from a new element i added earlier... bit of an update. Ill let ya know when its fully done, including vovals lol.
     
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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Chords in intro sound nice, drums came in a tad loud so i suspect the sytnhs might need to come up to account for the drums level.

    the high end is quite nice on the drums, maybe a liiiiitle bit messy though and abit too upfront

    Vocal could work i rekon, i know u said ignore it but you cant its in the track hahaa if u could do more with it then it could work. Is the sound of it an fx u added or is the sample like that? if its like that as a sample then scrap it it wont sound good imo

    Bass is overall quite nice, its deepish, could maybe have a little bit more low end to it, with this kind of tune id expect BIG bass

    good effort man, not a bad little number there, got some vibes to it. With more edits n shit will sound pretty nice

    defo bring that high end down on drums in volume a bit after it finished! :)
     
  13. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Thanks for the feed man!

    Nah the vocal is real good quality, i was just messing around with filter's and stuff just experimenting really. I'll take what you said into account. noice.
     
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    I have always been a fan of your tracks, and this one is no exception.

    I actually really like the vocal, I think it needs a bit more work to make it sit a bit better with the track.

    The pads on the track are very good. I think the beat sounds a tiny bit weak... not volume wise, but it just sounds like it could have a bit more weight to it.

    The sub goes really well with the pads, but could do with being a bit heavier.

    All in all I like the track mate, keep me posted as to when its finished.
     
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    Thanks for the honesty! ;)
     
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    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    /watches this thread like a hawk for updates
     
  17. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeeeh mate lovely tunage! really enjoyin this one, has a crazy mysterious feel to it. i actually think the vocal sounds alright, you dont really notice it when the sub comes in, just sounds like another instrument.
    the drums sound pretty perfect to me, maybe just try vary them a little more after a while. love the low wobble bass, reminds me of starlight by netsky.
    all i all a very well produced tune big ups!
     
  18. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Thanks a ton mate, fancy a collab?
     
  19. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    just had another listen to the 'old' version ;)

    Mate- thats possibly the most enjoyable 4 minutes I've had this week!
    Love the bass and the pad harmony..

    YES YES!
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Thanks buddy, top bannana!

    I will be completing this tune, im playing around with some vocal ideas as i 'speak' trying to come up with something great.