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The break is pretty nice, oldskool vibes, nice variations and things
Kick is a smidge loud on my system.
Track needs more variation and to develop more though, rather than just stacking up loops. Think about the bigger picture-build, drop, breakdown, verse, chorus, whatever, just different sections
Also consider adding more harmonic/melodic content- it's not all about breaks and basses, you need some notes things to a) fill the frequency spectrum and b) add some kind of mood/vibes- dark, soulful, chilled, funny whatever
My low end isn't up, no. The kick's not a huge problem, it just sticks out a little too much. It's easy to not notice these things when you're just starting out, also everyone's system is different so it could be my headphones are a little too heavy on the bass (don't think so though, on other tracks they're usually too quiet) or yours are a little quiet on the bass.
You don't have to be new dnb to have harmonies/ melodic content though- jungle tunes will have a little bit, normally in the form of samples. You have a guitar, which is a good start, but I think maybe a little something else, just once or twice every 8/16 bars will add more interest and structure
I agree, sounds nice but it's like it misses something, maybe some samples used creatively or some padsAlso consider adding more harmonic/melodic content
I agree, sounds nice but it's like it misses something, maybe some samples used creatively or some pads
I'm not the best person to consult on mix tbh, I have got it wrong many times in the past.
Another comment is you seem to be creating tracks really really quickly- it's unusal to make them so fast. Maybe you should spend more time on each track individually, and make each track more complicated- more complex sound design, more change ups more fills/edits, more layers of percussion, more processing etc. Simplicity is good but it feels like you've cut corners. try making a copy of a track you like (as an exercise) and you'll see how much work you can put into it...
I'm not the best person to consult on mix tbh, I have got it wrong many times in the past.
Another comment is you seem to be creating tracks really really quickly- it's unusal to make them so fast. Maybe you should spend more time on each track individually, and make each track more complicated- more complex sound design, more change ups more fills/edits, more layers of percussion, more processing etc. Simplicity is good but it feels like you've cut corners. try making a copy of a track you like (as an exercise) and you'll see how much work you can put into it...