Some dark/fast DnB (feedback appreciated)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Amnestic, Oct 26, 2014.

  1. Amnestic

    Amnestic Member

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    As the title says, looking for some feedback. I like to make songs with a lot going on, but I know I tend to clutter them up a lot in doing so. Some fresh ears would be helpful.

    Thanks for listening!
     
  2. AlienWeapon

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    I like the drum work you got going on and that classic Reese is nice. The mix sounds super muddy to me though and the lead seems too loud/prominent. The bass and drums should be more the focus IMO. Maybe eq the lead to push it back a little in the mid area and high pass anything that isn't your bass really. It does tend to sound cluttered in some places so remember to allow room for things to breath for example if you introduce all the elements too soon they have less impact than if they had more space.
     
  3. Northern Seagul

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    interesting tune, not ordinary)
     
  4. wingz

    wingz everyones fav austrian

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    the idea itself is pretty cool and the shuffle sounds really neat

    mixdown wise it sounds like everything is fighting for space, you might want to start sidechain,split and eq stuff properly