Dubstep Sobec - Corruption

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  1. MisterApe

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    So, been experimenting with 100/140bpm stuff a lot lately, this is my take on it.
    Anything that's wrong with it, let me know.
     
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  2. smoothassilk

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    Nice work... love the groove.
    Maybe the drums need a more variation within each section, and less minimal fills? Have you got a sub in there? If you have, it needs to be weightier, and if not, you need one.
    That's the first tune btw.
     
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  3. Menosance

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    It needs most definitively a sub. Love the groove and the intro very well balanced :) Mix-wise it's good but it needs some variation in the drum pattern, an extra kick here or an extra snare there you know?? Overall it is a very good 140bpm track :)
     
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    hmm, might be my mixing enviroment, it had a sub when I listened to it on my headphones o:.
     
  5. Mason John

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    No ya'll there's a sub in there, I can hear it. I think it's moreso the kick is so strong it's actually gutting the sub's presence a good deal, but that could be easily fixed.

    If I were a rapper this is something I could spit on top of. Actually looking into getting a cheap audio recorder today so maybe.

    Nice beat here tho dude; lead is interesting, percussion is tight. One of your strongest imho.
     
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    Well you can have it in wav if you want to give it a shot : ).
     
  7. Mania

    Mania i fukin wot m8

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    The production is like, just crazy. It's like, just so good. Everything works together really well, and i love the effects. I'm having some trouble with the bass content though, not hearing much of it. It could use some more percussive variation, and maybe a decent break after the first chorus.
     
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    Well, I was having some issues with how loud the bass was, when I made it louder by eq'ing it took away some of the vibe of the track.
    Thanks for the kind words though! Very motivating : ).
     
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    interesting tune , good vibes ~ :)
    maybe u need to give more power your bassline and more any fills to diversify track.
     
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    great,sounds very tight,there is sub i can hear but i cant feel it:)
     
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    How does one make you feel a sub? o:
    I usually check sub on my headphones and a subwoofer isn't an option!
     
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    ^Put the headphones on your chest and see if they thump like a defibrillator ;).
     
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    Haha, well I'm going to try and use my car's stereo, see if that helps it a bit more :p.
     
  14. Pyrococcus

    Pyrococcus Urban Break Twister

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    Cool suction FX sounds :)
    The tune is kicking up a fuss, nevertheless it really needs (more) elements playing more than one note (over and over) for me.