Right I have had a listen. Good track mate... there are a few bits I would personally do...
I think the main bassline sounds like its been filtered a bit too much... If you let the high frequencys out a bit more then it might make the bass sound a bit more growly and I think that would suit the track.
I think the snare could do with another layer, just something a bit snappy to bring it out to the front of the mix a bit more.
I would think about making the intro slightly shorter, but thats just my personal preference on this style of dnb.
I like the vocal sample over it, it suits the mood of the track.
Pretty good track, I'm really liking the subtle background noises, it gives the track a nice texture, the only thing I would say is the bass is sounding a little muddy and the snare sounds like it needs to be a bit more prominent. Apart from that, nice work.