So I'm starting on this - need help

dannyb1

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Hi guys I was currently working on a project but have shelved it to one side as I have a track that I seriously would love to go a bit jungly with.
I have a basic 2 step dnb pattern, a hat shuffling, a break just chopped for it's hat pattern and another break behind.(I think)
The track I am working on is steel pulses "babylon makes the rules"

And here is where I'm at at the moment

https://soundcloud.com/danny-b-official%2Fbabylon
As always any feedback is much gratefully received , I would like some input mainly with "what should be added to go along with the intro" "what parts of the actual tune should I chop to go with it" (sorry I know it sounds like I would rather give you the track and ask you to make it for me but that's not the case, I just like to learn with people who know what there talking about and can give better info then a tutorial would for what I need)
 

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the highs are too harsh, they should be smooth and glossy. mate can you send me the stems of what you did i can throw in a 2-4 bass and just give the mix a tidy up and give you an idea of what it can sound like? but what youve done so far is fine man. up to you though man
 

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the vocs original sample is running too dirty man, sounds like its through some distortion or something like that, but theres loads you can do with it ive got a sick bassline going
 

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Absolutely love it you made that how I never could, do you think that it might be because I high passed it that it sounds like that or just nbecause it was a you tube rip?
 
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