Smooth, relaxing drum and bass tune; any feedback would be great!

[Dan Zvi]

Here's the link



Hope you enjoy it!

 

[WOP!l6]

I like the mood. Right now I just have my phone on me, so can not say any thing about sound quality.
I do think you need to give the drums some more groove.

Care to check out my Soundcloud?



I will be testing my fl studio mobile, so don't expect to much clear sounds... But the drumprogramming should be not that bad

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

loving this one very soulful reminds me of good looking records in the 90's

 

[Dan Zvi]

loving this one very soulful reminds me of good looking records in the 90's

oh wow cheers man!! XD

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

oh wow cheers man!! XD

any chance you'd sort me with a copy of it?

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

I would say though the drums could use a lot more variation and maybe a hp break layer to help it remain more interesting

 

[Dan Zvi]

I would say though the drums could use a lot more variation and maybe a hp break layer to help it remain more interesting

you can download it for free from soundcloud ill keep the drum advice in mind and may upload an improved version at some point in the near future, but can i ask what do u mean when u say "hp" break layer?

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

high passed break

 

[Sentierum]

I like your track and the 90's vibe Maybe the piano is a little drowned too much in reverb, is it played by yourself? If so try to look this https://cinesamples.com/product/piano-in-blue
What have you used for creating the bass?

 

[Dan Zvi]

I like your track and the 90's vibe Maybe the piano is a little drowned too much in reverb, is it played by yourself? If so try to look this https://cinesamples.com/product/piano-in-blue
What have you used for creating the bass?

cheers!! i was aiming for that i did play it in myself, just some chords, ill have a little look at that link! and with the bass i just used a simple ES E synth on logic.

 

[Mentor & Moore]

Great track man it has a very nice and chill vibe!

 

[Dan Zvi]

I would say though the drums could use a lot more variation and maybe a hp break layer to help it remain more interesting

This is how I've improved it with the drums; any better?
or any worse? XD

(Also even though the link says version 3, its definitely only the 2nd version)

 

[JoErOe]

yes id say the drum elements are a bit better now. the mix down of the parts could use a bit of work to get things to cut through. a more prominent kick and snare would help all the new elements compliment each other, instead of everything seeming so close to the same volume and dynamic(not that dnb drums are very dynamic anyway, i think it just helps the bounce of things) side chaining the top elements to the kick and/or snare is also good for this, Keep it up tho m8 the vibes here are great and the middle section before the second drop i enjoyed a lot!

 

[Dan Zvi]

yes id say the drum elements are a bit better now. the mix down of the parts could use a bit of work to get things to cut through. a more prominent kick and snare would help all the new elements compliment each other, instead of everything seeming so close to the same volume and dynamic(not that dnb drums are very dynamic anyway, i think it just helps the bounce of things) side chaining the top elements to the kick and/or snare is also good for this, Keep it up tho m8 the vibes here are great and the middle section before the second drop i enjoyed a lot!

Thanks for all the advice, very much appreciated glad you enjoyed it!

 

[Rounder RG]

Sounds good to me, drums are lovely and clear. Bassline is smooth but could possibly do with a little more variation.

Nice work.