Small Loop of a dubstep track I'm working on

I know it needs alot of work but this is my first attempt at anythin, an I've only had fruity about 2 days, so let us know what you think
Cheers


http://www.zshare.net/audio/61324948e9e517f3/

 

You call that a loop? Go on with ya! At least you coulda looped it a couple of times.

 

good mate. Hate to say it but very generic tho. Need to think outside the box with dubstep i think. Dont wanna just make something that sounds like every other dubstep tune. Checkout my dubstep tune called DARK NIGHT
www.reverbnation.com/fratanize
Sound quality was good tho mate. professional.
peace

 

The idea was download it an play it in you mediaplayer!

 

Cheers man, its my first attempt at anythin so I just thought I'd go for a simple track

 

Need more hats to keep it rolling, and tho whole thing is sounding kinda reverb-ish, tone it a bit done. Nice try tho. Good luck.

 

nice first try. make more.